I have been trying to write a new poem for a very long time. Usually I write poems when I get a sudden urge and I complete writing one in half and hour or so.
But this poem took me THREE long days!
It got me so frustrated that I almost decided to discard it! But today I was finally able to complete it! (Thanks to Attack on Titan!... It fired my desire to do so)
Hope you enjoy reading it!
No Name..
My Lady, I have a favour to ask
She stood there as hard as stone
My Lady, would you answer what I ask
The nod seemed restricted just as a porcelain doll's
Your name, I want to know your name.
With those lips, that mocked every dead girl's
So white, So pink, So dull.
She asked "What for?"
It weren't her white tresses nor her skin white as snow.
It weren't her eyes
I shivered they were so cold.
I blushed, I confessed
"I might fall for you"
She stood as hard as ever
yet so graceful
Finally she spoke through those lips
that seemed sewn tight
Finally she whispered
with all her might
"I have no name"
I stared right at her eyes
I knew she was lying
Yet her face bore no sign of guilt,
Her eyes had no regret
My Lady, She wasn't lying.
I kneeled...
I yelled...
"Claudia called you lame
Deirdre desolate
Emily calls you her enemy
And Lola..
She claims you are
A lady encroached by heartaches
I could see her agony
Her eyes shone with it..
shivers had long stopped..
I could only tremble looking at it
She repeated..
"I have no name"
And started to walk past me..
As I cried...
"I asked you your name...
Yet you didn't ask for mine..
Am I not worthy of it?
Am I not that fine
I felt her Icy hand land on my shoulder
Her voice as clear as crystal
" aren't you looking for one?"
For the first time
I saw her smile
I could barely make out an angel in that body
But now I saw a goddess
No wonder I was a recluse...
No wonder I saw her as one
She didn't need a name
....
And now
Nor did I.
But this poem took me THREE long days!
It got me so frustrated that I almost decided to discard it! But today I was finally able to complete it! (Thanks to Attack on Titan!... It fired my desire to do so)
Hope you enjoy reading it!
No Name..
My Lady, I have a favour to ask
She stood there as hard as stone
My Lady, would you answer what I ask
The nod seemed restricted just as a porcelain doll's
Your name, I want to know your name.
With those lips, that mocked every dead girl's
So white, So pink, So dull.
She asked "What for?"
It weren't her white tresses nor her skin white as snow.
It weren't her eyes
I shivered they were so cold.
I blushed, I confessed
"I might fall for you"
She stood as hard as ever
yet so graceful
Finally she spoke through those lips
that seemed sewn tight
Finally she whispered
with all her might
"I have no name"
I stared right at her eyes
I knew she was lying
Yet her face bore no sign of guilt,
Her eyes had no regret
My Lady, She wasn't lying.
I kneeled...
I yelled...
"Claudia called you lame
Deirdre desolate
Emily calls you her enemy
And Lola..
She claims you are
A lady encroached by heartaches
I could see her agony
Her eyes shone with it..
shivers had long stopped..
I could only tremble looking at it
She repeated..
"I have no name"
And started to walk past me..
As I cried...
"I asked you your name...
Yet you didn't ask for mine..
Am I not worthy of it?
Am I not that fine
I felt her Icy hand land on my shoulder
Her voice as clear as crystal
" aren't you looking for one?"
For the first time
I saw her smile
I could barely make out an angel in that body
But now I saw a goddess
No wonder I was a recluse...
No wonder I saw her as one
She didn't need a name
....
And now
Nor did I.
That was really nice 😍
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Amazing poem.
Thanks a lot Hitanshu!
ReplyDeleteGreat one Durva! :D
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DeleteWow! Great one! Gave me goosebumps. Amazing! Keep writing :D
ReplyDeleteThanks!
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